Thursday, June 18, 2009

DM - Richie

Hi Richie,

You have made a good start to the model.

Generally topology looks fairly solid. My main comments are that the knuckles on the hands and the feet should be repositioned slightly. Here is a scribble to show you what I mean:



The foot is in the same situation as the hand.

The face is looking good, just try ans get rid of the tri next to the ear. I might smooth strangely and all quads is a good habit to get into.......... generally.

Also the hands look a little small.

Other than that alls looking good. I would suggest doing some pose test ASAP to test your topology as your pose is pretty extreme and might need some extra tweaks.

Good luck and look forward to seeing more.

Cheers,

Dan

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